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Dead To The World by ~Graycat:iconGraycat:



Dead to the world

Living is the hardest thing
When your soul is already dead
And pain is the king
Of the thoughts in your head
Darkness is all you know
When everyone looks down on you
All your compassion will go
As you realise it’s nothing new
Your thoughts cut like blades
As your mind spins
And your conscience fades
Forgetting all your sins
You get up and go
Living in pain and strife
Forgetting those you know
After you have cleaned the knife.
©2005-2009 ~Graycat
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Manic Depressive poem written while being Manic Depressive
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Most probably your best poem so far, well it is my favourite any way.....

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thatsreal good i have felt like that a lot good putting it in words :)

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1.Lifes a bitch and then you die: So why aint I dead yet? I'm waiting
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Thanks again! I was really angry and depressed when I wrote it so ya....

:ahoy:

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History is the sum total of things that could have been avoided. - Konrad Adenauer

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yeh i could tell you did good

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1.Lifes a bitch and then you die: So why aint I dead yet? I'm waiting
2. [link] My new Page please look thank you :)
Thanks for the friends thing.

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History is the sum total of things that could have been avoided. - Konrad Adenauer

Please visit me Graycat and check out my :gallery: here [link]
your welcome :)

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1.Lifes a bitch and then you die: So why aint I dead yet? I'm waiting
2. [link] My new Page please look thank you :)
i, obviously enjoyed that.

some moving shit
Thanks!

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History is the sum total of things that could have been avoided. - Konrad Adenauer

Please visit me Graycat and check out my :gallery: here [link]
u r most welcome

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'the world should listen then- as I am listening now'
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